Wow, I am absolutely blown away by your Valorant kill montage, and the rap music is really good and engaging and is easy to listen to, and also flows really well with the almost fluid nature of your montage video-the smooth editing makes it feel like that this video is not just a bunch of separate clips of cool-looking kills, but more like a bunch of snapshots in a bigger story about how the games went for you as you are playing Phoenix and Reyna. I like how you timed the kills to the beat of the music (as well as some of the gun and knife animations, which was a nice touch and cool to watch), and this editing almost makes Valorant feel like a rhythm game, which just makes everything seem even more satisfying, and even though this is pretty standard practice for gaming montages at this point, you are able to pull it off well.
But I think what really separates this montage from all the other videos who use the exact same formula is you adding your own reactions and commentary to what is happening, which really gives this video that much more personality and makes it feel more alive and relatable to hear the person behind the screen, as opposed to just watching another tryhard sweat in Valorant (not those types of videos are bad - they sure are impressive to watch, but they get really repetitive after a while.) I like how you didn't overdo it with the commentary either, and just had it just sorta in the background with the music in only a few of the clips, so it doesn't break that immersion and this video still feels like a montage overall. I think you struck a pretty good balance between these 2 forms of content and created something that is somewhere between a pure Valorant montage and a let's play almost, and I find this approach to be quite innovative-this is the first time I came across a montage with this type of commentary in the middle-so definitely keep doing that!
Also I like how you kept this montage short and sweet with only 2 songs, which helps keep the audience's attention so they don't get bored, and that sendoff at the last few seconds of this montage after the song has already ended is both surprising (okay, I was not expecting the clown face edit) and also quite memorable, again showcasing your unique flair and personality in a lighthearted way and I think that is a perfect way of ending a montage while also leaving the audience wanting more. I think you did a really good job overall with this video and I personally really enjoyed watching it and wishing that I was half as good at the game as you, lol. I look forward to seeing your future montages, and I hope that they will be even better than this one (no pressure though, obviously.)
